Thursday, December 16, 2010

ever lasting essay

      Ruthless,nomadic,the ways of the mongol. Mongols took over various places and showed no mercy doing it. But even though they were feared all through out the eastern hemisphere, are they really a civilization?
         Mongols have killed people with all sorts of technology, but none of the technology was invented by them. Mongols did not invent things, because mongols are a non technological society. Even though, they will except any type of technology. For example the bow and arrow. The bow and arrow were one of the reasons why the mongol military was so successful. A mongols skill with a bow and arrow was phenomenal. If you would have seen a mongol with a bow and arrow in his hand, on horse back and you were his target you would be dead.
        Is the mongol empire really a civilization? I think not, because they have no social class. I think this for a couple of reasons. The first reason is they were nomads, so they travel a lot. Second, they took over various places around the world, for example they took over parts of China,Europe,and Russia. So there couldn't be a social class,because every place had different jobs and customs. This is why they cant be a civilization, because there is no social class.
       Mongol emperors had a passionate interest in art. They would put it all around the home, to show how much they loved it. Types of arts mongols had were,Calligraphy, and Khadg. Khadg is with different type of materials, like bronze silver or gold. It also made sculptures look like there alive. One of the greatest Mongolian artist known as Bogdo Gegen Zanabazar. He lived from 1635-1723. Bogdo was known for his golden statues that looked  alive, because of it's feature and action of what it's doing.
       Mongols had a monarchy government. In 1206 A.D Even though the mongols were nomads they declared Genghis Khan as there ruler. Khan led a seduction of an empire. The mongol 1279 they had all of China,Russia,Iran, and Iraq. They were able to this because there military was so fast,ferocious, and showed no mercy. With out that government the mongols wouldn't have been able to be so successful in there battles.
         Mongolian writing was created almost 5,000 years ago. Writing had a major affect on Mongolian culture. It changed how they fought,worked, and there every day jobs. It's still unknown when the writing was exactly invented. The Mongolian alphabet has 27 letters, 22 consonants and 5 vowels. They call this writing system the Khalkha Mongolian.
         Mongols always had this saying.” Keep breakfast for yourself, share lunch with your friends,and give dinner to your enemy”. Mongols most important meals were breakfast and lunch. They had boiled mutton with a lot of fat and flour and some times dairy or rice. Some mongols added horse meat to there meal as well. Mongolians drank a lot of tea, the classic drink was suutei tsai. If you were a man and you didn't want to drink arkhi, you would be called a wimp.
         Mongols had four religions Buddhism, Shamanism,Muslim,and Christianity. Most mongols believe in Buddhism, and it's teachings. Buddhism teaches that suffering is caused when desire stops. Meditation, and wisdom can stop you from suffering. Christianity is based on the teachings of Jesus and the old and new testament. Shamanism are teachings,saying meditation between the spirit and visible world is effected by shamans.
       The mongols influenced not only the eastern hemisphere but the whole world. There art is shown all through out the world in art museums. The way they used the bow and arrow was so efficient people try to learn how to use it like the mongols did it. They showed small tribes can become the most power full and feared for a longtime. This is ancient Mongolia.

2 comments:

  1. non technology (technological) society. Even though, they will except (accept) any type of technology.
    The firs (first) reason
    Khadg is with different type of materials, and making sculptures come to life (can you explain this a bit more--unclear)
    look (ed) like there (they are) alive

    Your art, government and writing paragraphs need organization and seperation. Fix those and you will be fine I think. I think I only see 7 paragraphs--hard to be sure. You say no social class, but they had an emperor--could anyone be emperor? Did anyone serve the emperor? If so, wouldn't that put them in a lower social class unless they had equal influence over the people of the land. What happened to the people they conquered? did they have equal status in Mongolian society? These questions should help you infer what sort of social structure they had.

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  2. Much better. Excellent work. George you are a very fluid writer and I find your writers voice entertaining uet knowledgable.

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